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Pre code poetry.. huh what? Grab a beer, sit, we'll chat and play bongos
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The Contest entry is Weird Mysteries #12. This Bernard Baily cover should get those creative juices flowing!

Please quick quote this pic along with your entry. This will run through Sunday and winner will be announced on Monday. Let the first pre code poetry contest bragging rights begin!

 

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"Never apart"

Sweat pours down, four hours worth, drips down onto the disrupted earth

Shovel finally hits its mark, in the distance the beasts howl and bark

Twas me that sent you to your doom, is me that prys you from this tomb

Five years passed this very day, that fateful day I made you pay

I pick you up and hold you tight, that red dress is such a sight

Was that dress that sealed your fate, when I found you and your date

"No stop!" Is what you said, as I took that ax and removed his head

Blood spouted all over the floor, you slipped as you shot to the door

My hands fell upon your throat, your eyes swam upward as they float

How long had I chocked and squeezed? My mind was surely diseased

Sirens rang and broke my spell, stumbled up and made my bail

It was clear what I had done, and five years now I've been on the run

I return to see your face, and to remove you from your resting place

I know now with all my heart, we will never again be apart!

 

 

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Last day to get entries in for the contest. Still only two official entries for a shot at the Wonder Comics 18. Thanks to those who have contributed and hopefully we can have some more entries today.

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Worlds apart you call to me

Mildred I called you, you called me Ray

We were joined heart and soul that very day

 

Worlds apart you call to me

Young lovers once but across the sea

I had to sail alas, it was my destiny

 

Worlds apart you call to me

You were my first love from long ago

When will I see you again, this I must know

 

Worlds apart you call to me

Years go by as time does unwind

I can hear your voice calling me in my mind

 

Worlds apart you call to me

I will, I will! Return to my native soil

I will have your sweet embrace that none can spoil

 

Worlds apart you call to me

I'm here, I'm here! But I'm all alone

Your call beckons me to find you under a stone

 

Worlds apart you call to me

 

 

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Ok, I'll play.

 

The Contest entry is Weird Mysteries #12. This Bernard Baily cover should get those creative juices flowing!

Please quick quote this pic along with your entry. This will run through Sunday and winner will be announced on Monday. Let the first pre code poetry contest bragging rights begin!

 

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You loved an amputee like me.

Such a nice and weird lady.

 

Your cooking smelled up all the halls,

And so I sucked out your eyeballs.

 

Now it is late, and I've got to go.

It's almost time for the Walking Dead show.

 

Before I leave, let's hug and pray,

Who the heck was Mildred and Cray?

 

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The 4 finalist are in. Please pm me with your favorite selection by 8pm est tomorrow so I can announce the winner of the inaugural pre code poetry contest. Thanks to everyone who participted !

Entry #1

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Entry#2

 

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Please release me, you sentimental fool

can you not see I'm now a nearly perfect ghoul.

Let me rest entombed in blissful unknown peace

even though you wait, retardedly, for my release.

 

My clothes are now in tatters, in case you had not seen

worms have left me no skin, my bones cast an excellent sheen.

The earth has cleansed my body of any trace of fat

thank goodness I have not had to endure nibbling's from a rat.

 

Have you not noticed that my skin is now long gone

it's been 10 dreary years, and they have left me visibly wan.

My teeth are thoroughly rotted, my bones are covered with dust

so place me gently back into the grave, as now you surely must.

 

Fly away and be gone forever, you goulish phantom dreamer

or I will have to to exert myself, and become your nightmare screamer.

Please release me, and let me rest in my tomb

twill be much more enjoyable than haunting you till your doom.

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Entry #3

 

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Worlds apart you call to me

Mildred I called you, you called me Ray

We were joined heart and soul that very day

 

Worlds apart you call to me

Young lovers once but across the sea

I had to sail alas, it was my destiny

 

Worlds apart you call to me

You were my first love from long ago

When will I see you again, this I must know

 

Worlds apart you call to me

Years go by as time does unwind

I can hear your voice calling me in my mind

 

Worlds apart you call to me

I will, I will! Return to my native soil

I will have your sweet embrace that none can spoil

 

Worlds apart you call to me

I'm here, I'm here! But I'm all alone

Your call beckons me to find you under a stone

 

Worlds apart you call to me

 

 

Entry #4

 

Ok, I'll play.

 

The Contest entry is Weird Mysteries #12. This Bernard Baily cover should get those creative juices flowing!

Please quick quote this pic along with your entry. This will run through Sunday and winner will be announced on Monday. Let the first pre code poetry contest bragging rights begin!

 

CCI01042015_zpse5e04dbe.jpg

 

 

You loved an amputee like me.

Such a nice and weird lady.

 

Your cooking smelled up all the halls,

And so I sucked out your eyeballs.

 

Now it is late, and I've got to go.

It's almost time for the Walking Dead show.

 

Before I leave, let's hug and pray,

Who the heck was Mildred and Cray?

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Entry #5:

 

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The lady had a weight loss plan

Five pounds a week the claim

Her goal was set to catch her man

To marry and change her name

 

It went as planned the first few months

Without asking any advice

She made the papers more than once

But no one threw any rice

 

The problem with the weight she shed

Was the starting point, you see

Anna Rexia was wed to a coffin instead

And her fiancé got the burial fee

 

 

 

 

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