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Pre code poetry.. huh what? Grab a beer, sit, we'll chat and play bongos
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retrocomics

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Thanks, porcupine. Well the votes are in, recounted, no hanging chads and the winner by only one vote is Jayman! Congratulations! The thread will continue in the free style pick your cover format until the next contest rolls around. Thanks to all who contributed, voted, or just took a look. Good times.

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This is fun, I think I'm addicted now! :grin:

 

WeirdMysteries5_zpscc2827e2.jpg

 

So you say I'm insane

To boldly join together

a monkey and a brain

I'm really not sure whether

it'll feel pleasure or pain

 

You see I like to dabble

in very Weird Mysteries

But enough of this babble

this could rewrite histories

if I don't raise a rabble

 

In my lab I have a vat

that's beginning to bubble

How could you ever guess that

coming here would be trouble

once in this tub you sat!

 

You are my experiment!

Don't presume to show surprise

you answered the letter I sent!

Now you see with monkey eyes

your brain within will ferment

 

So you're in my little stew

it's a little tongue and cheek

does that really upset you?

I must know if you can speak

or will you just fling some poo?

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This is fun, I think I'm addicted now! :grin:

 

WeirdMysteries5_zpscc2827e2.jpg

 

So you say I'm insane

To boldly join together

a monkey and a brain

I'm really not sure whether

it'll feel pleasure or pain

 

You see I like to dabble

in very Weird Mysteries

But enough of this babble

this could rewrite histories

if I don't raise a rabble

 

In my lab I have a vat

that's beginning to bubble

How could you ever guess that

coming here would be trouble

once in this tub you sat!

 

You are my experiment!

Don't presume to show surprise

you answered the letter I sent!

Now you see with monkey eyes

your brain within will ferment

 

So you're in my little stew

it's a little tongue and cheek

does that really upset you?

I must know if you can speak

or will you just fling some poo?

The reigning champ comes back in free style force! Very awesome, Jay. That cover begged a poem. I put your winning book in the mail today, BTW. Keep up the good work!

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This is fun, I think I'm addicted now! :grin:

 

WeirdMysteries5_zpscc2827e2.jpg

 

So you say I'm insane

To boldly join together

a monkey and a brain

I'm really not sure whether

it'll feel pleasure or pain

 

You see I like to dabble

in very Weird Mysteries

But enough of this babble

this could rewrite histories

if I don't raise a rabble

 

In my lab I have a vat

that's beginning to bubble

How could you ever guess that

coming here would be trouble

once in this tub you sat!

 

You are my experiment!

Don't presume to show surprise

you answered the letter I sent!

Now you see with monkey eyes

your brain within will ferment

 

So you're in my little stew

it's a little tongue and cheek

does that really upset you?

I must know if you can speak

or will you just fling some poo?

This is why you earned my vote! The 'Master' of pre code!
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Photo Op

 

"Ah, the circus has come to town.

Take a shot of you, may i clown?

Front page news, you'll make, i'm sure

End to all frowns, your smile's the cure"

 

"On the front page, i'm certain i'll be

But not for my smile, because you see

I'll make you an offer, my word is true

Take a shot OF me, i take a shot AT you!"

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Photo Op

 

"Ah, the circus has come to town.

Take a shot of you, may i clown?

Front page news, you'll make, i'm sure

End to all frowns, your smile's the cure"

 

"On the front page, i'm certain i'll be

But not for my smile, because you see

I'll make you an offer, my word is true

Take a shot OF me, i take a shot AT you!"

 

Terrific!

Works perfectly with this cover! (worship)

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Casey%20Crime%20Photographer%202_zpsqhmaapvk.jpg

Photo Op

 

"Ah, the circus has come to town.

Take a shot of you, may i clown?

Front page news, you'll make, i'm sure

End to all frowns, your smile's the cure"

 

"On the front page, i'm certain i'll be

But not for my smile, because you see

I'll make you an offer, my word is true

Take a shot OF me, i take a shot AT you!"

Very nice, Sagii! I like your poem but I sure don't like clowns! They are shiesty and creepy!

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Clown, clown why so down

Don't you know your place?

I don't like your silly frown

Perhaps I'll carve a smile on your face!

:applause: The Jayman strikes again! Love that cover and the poem. Though Retro is probably creeper out by his own thread now with all the painted faces lol
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