Updating Captain Marvel Adventures #26 (for Graders)
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The current layout of Captain Marvel Adventures #26 (of July 23, 2020):

Key Comments: Chap. 5 Monster Society of Evil serial., Mr. Mind revealed as a worm (1st app.), Captain Marvel visits Seatle WA.

Art Comments: Otto Binder and Al Liederman stories, C.C. Beck and Al Liederman art, C.C. Beck cover

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My proposed (updated) layout of Captain Marvel Adventures #26:

Key Comments: 1st full appearance of Mr.Mind., Chapter. 5 of Monster Society of Evil story, and Captain Marvel visits Seattle WA.

Art Comments: Otto Binder, Ray Tender, Al Liederman, and Otto Binder story, and C. C. Beck, Pete Costanza and Al Liederman art, and C. C. Beck cover and art.

1. Changing 'Mr. Mind revealed as a worm (1st app.)' to '1st full appearance of Mr.Mind', as it is the full appearance of the character, with Mr. Mind having voice cameos in Captain Marvel Adventures #22-25 - also, it lessens the confusion between #22-25 and #26).

Captain Marvel Adventures #22, #23, #24 and #25 - First four cameo appearances of Mr.Mind (IMAGES)

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Captain Marvel Adventures #22, #23, #24 and #25 - First four cameo appearances of Mr.Mind

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Captain Marvel Adventures #26 - 1st full appearance of Mr. Mind (IMAGE)

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Captain Marvel Adventures #26 - 1st full appearance of Mr. Mind

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2. Changing 'Chap. 5 Monster Society of Evil serial' to 'Chapter. 5 of Monster Society of Evil story' to make it a bit more concise.

3. Changing to Captain Marvel visits Seattle WA, as current layout misspells 'Seattle' to 'Seatle' 

4. Ray Tender and Otto Binder are added to 'stories' due to their ------script contributions to 'Captain Marvel and Sabotage in Seattle!' on Page 4 and 'Sharks Below' on Page 31 (name written), respectively.

5. Pete Costanza is added to 'art' due to his pencil and illustrations in 'Captain Marvel and the Plundering Giant!' on Page 19.

6. Acknowledging both C. C. Beck's art and cover contribution.

Edited by Bart Allen

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Hello, thanks for your message.  I will forward this information over to our graders for their consideration.  Thanks!

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To Bart Allen, I especially like that in your new layout, the Mr Mind appearance is put first since that is the most important aspect of this book.

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18 hours ago, William-James88 said:

To Bart Allen, I especially like that in your new layout, the Mr Mind appearance is put first since that is the most important aspect of this book.

Thanks a lot, William - you're absolutely right lol

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